1 ``Partying like there`s no tomorrow``, for some persons there is no tomorrow indeed after a wild party. Cause these people die after partying whole night long



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1 ``Partying like there`s no tomorrow``, for some persons there is no tomorrow indeed after a wild party.Cause these people die after partying whole night long.

After they have taken XTC or other party drug.Xtc and boose are many used products at houseparties.Together with a loud music containing a big bass.

The people at an houseparty are having the time of their live.Most of these socalled ``housepartys`` are held at the house from the organiser of the party.

The organiser invites his friends,he arranges the music and sometimes the drugs.When the people are using drugs and alchol at the same time.The effects of these products are stronger.

2 Because XTC gives you an energy boost and everyone around you is much nicer.This is the reason why it`s an popular party drug.During a party,it`s very fun to have such an energyboost.And it`s also nice,that everyone seems to be much more friendly.

3 Little is known about the effects of using xtc during a longer period.One effect in the short term could be that you break down.It happens when you`ve taken a `bad` pill.

But the number of people who have died due to the use of xtc is much lower then the numer of people wo have died deu to the smoking.The number of people who are smoking is much bigger than the number of peole who are using XTC.So the number of victims from smoking are also bigger than the number of victims from using XTC,because much more people are smoking than using XTC.

4 One way to fight the use of ``bad`` XTC pills, is the legal controlled sale of XTC pills at the entrance of disco`s and parties.But this isn`t the right way of sloving this problem.

Xtc is always bad for you health,even if it is a ``clean`` XTC pill.When XTC is legally sold,it gives a wrong signal to the public.More people are going to use XTC than before.

Why wouldn`t you? All things considered it`s legal.This is also the reason why the numer of smokers is bigger then the number of xtc-users.

5 After considering all the pros and cons, I think that the party drug XTC must not and can not become legal by law.The number of users would grow dramatically and the bad pills would still be sold.Sometimes is it difficult to stay away from drugs like XTC.But I refuse to take the chance of gettting addicted to that stuff.My health and succes in life is much more important than going crazy on drugs in my opinion

``Partying like there`s no tomorrow``, for some persons there is no tomorrow indeed after a wild party.Cause (, because) these people die after partying whole night (the whole night of all night) long. After they have taken XTC or other party drug.Xtc and boose are many used (much used) products at houseparties.Together with a loud music (loud music) containing a big (much) bass.

The people at an (a) houseparty are having the time of their live. (lives) Most of these so called (so-called) ``housepartys`` (houseparties) are held at the house from (of) the organiser of the party. The organiser invites his friends,he arranges the music and sometimes the drugs.When the people are using drugs and alchol at the same time.The effects of these products are stronger.

2 Because (because leidt altijd een bijzin in, dit is een hoofdzin) XTC gives you an energy boost and everyone around you is much nicer.This is the reason why it`s an (a) popular party drug.During a party,it`s very fun to have such an energyboost.And it`s also nice,that everyone seems to be much more friendly. Hier zijn alle komma’s overbodig: in engels geven komma’s vooral een pauze in de zin aan. In geval van twijfel, dus komma’s weglaten

3 Little is known about the effects of using xtc during a longer period.One effect in the short term could be that you break down.It happens when you`ve taken a `bad` pill.

But the number of people who have died due to the use of xtc is much lower then (than) the numer of people wo have died deu to the (weglaten) smoking.The number of people who are smoking (smoke) is much bigger than the number of peole who are using (use) XTC.So the number of victims from smoking are (is) also bigger than the number of victims from using XTC,because much (many) more people are smoking than using XTC.

4 One way to fight the use of ``bad`` XTC pills, is the legal (legal, of legally, afhankelijk van wat je bedoelt)controlled sale of XTC pills at the entrance of disco`s (discos) and parties.But this isn`t (geen samentrekkingen) the right way of sloving this problem.

Xtc is always bad for you health,even if it is a ``clean`` XTC pill.When XTC is legally sold,it gives a wrong signal to the public.More people are going to use XTC than before.

Why wouldn`t you? All things considered it`s legal.This is also the reason why the numer of smokers is bigger then the number of xtc-users.

5 After considering all the pros and cons, I think that the party drug XTC must not and can not (cannot) become legal by law.The number of users would grow dramatically and the bad pills would still be sold.Sometimes is it difficult to stay away from drugs like XTC.But I refuse to take the chance of gettting addicted to that stuff.My health and succes in life is much more important than going crazy on drugs in my opinion


Je taalgebruik op zich is niet slecht, maar veel te slordig. Met zo veel slordige fouten is een voldoende bijna niet haalbaar.

Je zinnen lopen ook niet, door geen of slecht gebruik van leestekens.


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A good education is very important for every person because an educated person is more independent and is more succesfull (successful) in life than an uneducated person.

Having a good time at school is one important part of your succes (success) at school. I`m (I am) glad that my school is not in a big city and that the school itself is not big. I can praise myself happy with the fact that I`m able to attend at an Gymnasium and that most of my fellow students are from Dutch origins.

This is also the main reason why I think that it is very safe at school. Because people like Muslims are most of them time more aggressive than the average Dutch person.

Some people may think that this sentence is an expression of racism but it`s only a sentence based on facts. When you look at the history of voilence with wapens in the education. You will see that the suspect has always been a muslim.

The atmosphere at our school has always been peaceful. The main reason for this,is the fact that only a few muslims are following classes at this school. Another important reason is the fact that almost all of the students are smart enough to solve an quarrel without any violence.

The current measures to keep our school safe are enough because the atmosphere at our school isn`t violent.

The murder on the vice principal Hans van Wieren is in my opinion an classic example of the disfigurement of society.

The suspect was again a muslim.They haven`t got an ethical because most of these people are not raised properly or haven`t got a peaceful ethical.

It is the duty of the government to make society safe, so it`s also their duty to protect our society against disfigurement.

Al veel beter (lees, veel minder slordig) maar je blijft dezelfde soort fouten maken

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Wearing clothes is very important for every person in this society. Wearing clothes keeps you warm and it is also an obligation in this society. When you don`t wear any clothes, people will think you are a pevert.

It is important to decide,what kind of clothing you buy and wear. The kind of clothing you wear is an way to express your own style.

This is the main reason why the diversity in clothing is very important.

When I chose my clothing, the peer-pressure is not very big,but it is present. So when I choose my clothing, it has to be trendy and I must like it . Some clothing wich I wear, is not trendy. Wearing these non-trendy clothes is more a statement with the intention to let the other people know; I have my own style and I choose my own clothes.

The direction of the Tomlinscote School in Frimley have made a terrible mistake by sending these girls home.

Because I think that it is your own right,to choose your own clothing when you are going to school cause every person is unique and has his own style. When people haven not got the freedom to choose their own clothing, they have not got the freedom to express theirselves through clothing. This doesn`t stroke with our democracy cause the citizens in a democracy are free to make their own choices. This is the reason why I think that the direction of a school should not decide wich clothing is worn by the students. Unless the clothing is an expression of religion, cause a school is an neutral institution.

People are always wearing black clothes when they are visiting a funeral, cause wearing certain kinds of clothes is a way to express your feelings or it is the standard to wear a certain kind of clothing on occasions. Most of the people wants to be accepted, this is the main reason why people make sure that their style of clothing is proper to the occasion. So you can say, wearing clothes is a way to be accepted but also to be uniqeu

Wearing clothes is very important for every person in this society. Wearing clothes keeps you warm and it is also an obligation in this society. When you don`t wear any clothes, people will think you are a pevert.

It is important to decide,what kind of clothing you buy and wear. The kind of clothing you wear is an way to express your own style.

This is the main reason why the diversity in clothing is very important.

When I chose my clothing, the peer-pressure is not very big,but it is present. So when I choose my clothing, it has to be trendy and I must like it . Some clothing wich I wear, is not trendy. Wearing these non-trendy clothes is more a statement with the intention to let the other people know; I have my own style and I choose my own clothes.

The direction of the Tomlinscote School in Frimley have made a terrible mistake by sending these girls home.



Because I think that it is your own right,to choose your own clothing when you are going to school cause every person is unique and has his own style. When people haven not got the freedom to choose their own clothing, they have not got the freedom to express theirselves through clothing. This doesn`t stroke with our democracy cause the citizens in a democracy are free to make their own choices. This is the reason why I think that the direction of a school should not decide wich clothing is worn by the students. Unless the clothing is an expression of religion, cause a school is an neutral institution.

People are always wearing black clothes when they are visiting a funeral, cause wearing certain kinds of clothes is a way to express your feelings or it is the standard to wear a certain kind of clothing on occasions. Most of the people wants to be accepted, this is the main reason why people make sure that their style of clothing is proper to the occasion. So you can say, wearing clothes is a way to be accepted but also to be uniqeu



Er zijn grofweg twee soorten fouten te onderscheiden in jouw werk:


  1. de leestekenfouten: je plaats vaak punten en komma’s waar ze niet horen te staan. Het helpt wellicht om een zin in jezelf hardop voor te lezen, dan hoor je of er wel of niet een komma of punt vereist is.




  1. de spelfouten: hoewel al een stuk minder, blijf je toch relatief veel spelfouten maken, daarom mijn vraag: Hoe lang heb je gemiddeld over de schrijfopdrachten gedaan die je ingeleverd hebt? Als je minder dan 90 minuten besteed hebt (en dat vermoed ik) dan doe je er verstandig aan, de resterende tijd te gebruiken om in je woordenboek alle twijfelgevallen qua spelling te controleren.


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Smoking in public places isn’t allowed anymore. Is this a blessing for our society, or is it a curse?

In my opinion the introduction of this new rule banning smoking is a great blessing for our society.

I will try to explain my opinion using the following arguments:

Everybody knows the bad effects smoking has: it’s bad for your shape, your lungs and your heart. Smoking is the cause of several lethal and non-lethal diseases: Diseases like lung cancer, cardiovascular diseases and ballooning. People who are suffering from these diseases are fighting for their lives. They’re unable to perform normal tasks in daily life because they’re so limited in their physical movement. When people start smoking, they don`t know how badly their habit can influence their lives. This is the most important reason why I think that smoking should be discouraged in every possible way. This is an important duty for our government.

If smoking is allowed in public places and buildings, it delivers a wrong message to the public. These public buildings and places are paid with tax-money and are therefore the property of the government. So it would be rather weird if the government were trying to bring the number of smokers down but at the same time allowed smoking in her own buidlings.

When people are smoking in a room, other people in the vicinity of the smoker are automatically inhaling the smoke. Many people do not smoke because it’s unhealthy or becuase they’re allergic to smoke from cigarettes. The government is harming the people who don’t smoke, if she allows smokers in her buidlings. This wouldn’t be fair because most of the population isn’t a smoker and it’s also the duty of the governement to protect her citizens.

Smoking isn’t good for people`s health and because it’s the government’s duty to protect her citizens.

These are the reasons why I think that this new rule is a blessing for our

society


Smoking in public places isn’t allowed anymore. Is this a blessing for our society, or is it a curse?

In my opinion the introduction of this new rule banning smoking is a great blessing for our society.

I will try to explain my opinion using the following arguments:

Everybody knows the bad effects smoking has: it’s bad for your shape, your lungs and your heart. Smoking is the cause of several lethal and non-lethal diseases:

Diseases like lung cancer, cardiovascular diseases and ballooning. People who are suffering from these diseases are fighting for their lives. They’re unable to perform normal tasks in daily life because they’re so limited in their physical movement. When people start smoking, they don`t know how badly their habit can influence their lives. This is the most important reason why I think that smoking should be discouraged in every possible way. This is an important duty for our government.

If smoking is allowed in public places and buildings, it delivers a wrong message to the public. These public buildings and places are paid with tax-money and are therefore the property of the government. So it would be rather weird if the government were trying to bring the number of smokers down but at the same time allowed smoking in her own buidlings.

When people are smoking in a room, other people in the vicinity of the smoker are automatically inhaling the smoke. Many people do not smoke because it’s unhealthy or becuase they’re allergic to smoke from cigarettes. The government is harming the people who don’t smoke, if she allows smokers in her buidlings. This wouldn’t be fair because most of the population isn’t a smoker and it’s also the duty of the governement to protect her citizens.

Smoking isn’t good for people`s health and because it’s the government’s duty to protect her citizens.

These are the reasons why I think that this new rule is a blessing for our

society.


Wederom beter dan de vorige keer; je volhardt wel in het gebruik van samentrekkingen en je moet niet onnodig de continuous vorm (vorm van to be + w.w. + ing) gebruiken.

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